Course to prepare students for the literacy demands of college and the world of work.
Saturday, December 18, 2010
Thursday, December 16, 2010
Holiday Assignments
1. Complete Chapters 1-4 of Grammar Packet if you have not done so already.
2. If you did not submit your revision of the Unit 3 Timed Exam please do so. I have reopened the window on Turnitin.com
3. Make up an missing work for partial credit.
4. From the Senior Project Survival Guide:
2. If you did not submit your revision of the Unit 3 Timed Exam please do so. I have reopened the window on Turnitin.com
3. Make up an missing work for partial credit.
4. From the Senior Project Survival Guide:
Senior Presentation Guidelines*
The purpose of the Senior Presentation is to tell the story of the Senior Project by synthesizing what was learned from the product creation with the information from the paper. It is your chance to describe what you learned to a group of interested adults and peers.
Guidelines:
· The student should explain the process of creating the product and writing the paper. There should be an introduction, body and conclusion.
· The presentation must include visual or auditory aids such as PowerPoint or Keynote.
· The presentation must be 7 to 10 minutes in length including a question and answer period.
· The presentation should be rehearsed in front of an audience at least three times. You may use note cards or PowerPoint presentation as prompts.
· This is a formal presentation. Students should dress in business attire.
Useful URLS for PowerPoints
Remember to sign up for free LACER PowerPoint
class.
Remember you can sign up for free Keynote Tutorials at any Apple Store.
Saturday, December 11, 2010
Sunday, December 5, 2010
Senior Projects Papers Due December 6th
Final Draft are due tomorrow December 6th to turnitin.com
Some students will be asked to revise and resubmit to turnitin.com by Wednesday with the changes required in order to pass.
Some students will be asked to revise and resubmit to turnitin.com by Wednesday with the changes required in order to pass.
Week 14
Day | Class Work | Homework |
Monday | Peer Review Unit 3 essay | Type your constructed response and submit it to turnitin.com by Wednesday Readers writers notebook check on Tuesday. |
Tuesday | In class Reflection Essay on Unit 3 | Type your constructed response and submit it to turnitin.com by Wednesday |
Wednesday | Begin Unit 4 Activity 1 | Activity 2 |
Thursday G | Activity 3 | Activity 3 reread Grammar Packet Chapter 4 |
Friday | Grammar Packet Chapter 4 | Grammar Packer Chapter 4 |
Sunday, November 28, 2010
Turnitin.com Comments on Composition and Grammar
All work posted by 2 PM today is available for student review. Please make corrections. Don't forget to email me if you have questions.
Way to go seniors!
Way to go seniors!
Week 12 ( Senior Project Papers are due next Week)
Day | Class Work | Homework |
Monday Print weekly syllabus by Monday beginning of class time for 100 extra credit points | Bring thumb drive /memory tick daily. Turn it in.com review Activity 13 | Completed Senior projects due December 6th. All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Tuesday Shortened bell day | Activity 14 | Completed Senior projects due December 6th. All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Wednesday | Activity 15 Timed draft essay | Completed Senior projects due December 6th. All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Thursday | Activity 16 Peer review in class | Completed Senior projects due December 6th. All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Friday | Activity 17 Submit your final draft via Turnitin.com Remember to use spell and grammar check before your submit your essay. | Completed Senior projects due December 6th. All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Saturday, November 13, 2010
Week 11 Syllabus ( print by Monday Class time for 100 extra credit points)
Day | Class Work | Homework |
Monday Print weekly syllabus by Monday beginning of class time for 100 extra credit points | Read and annotate research paper in Textbook | Abstract /Precis due 11/22 All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com Grammar TBA |
Tuesday Gramorama 1 3-5 | Activity 9 p.42 Considering the structure of the text | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Abstract /Precis due 11/22 All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Wednesday | Activity 10 p. 42 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Abstract /Precis due 11/22 All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Thursday Guest teacher, DR. Cohen is grading Spa exam | Activity 11 p.43 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Abstract /Precis due 11/22 All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Friday Genut | Activity 12 p.43 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Abstract /Precis due 11/22 All submissions must be done through Turnitin.com |
Sunday, November 7, 2010
Week 10 syllabus ( print by Monday class for 100 Points)
Day | Class Work | Homework |
Monday Print weekly syllabus by Monday beginning of class time for 100 extra credit points | Activity 7 p.40 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Grammar TBA |
Tuesday Gramorama 1 3-5 | Activity 8 p.41 Connotation Denotation | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Grammar TBA |
Wednesday | Activity 9 p. 42 Considering the structure of the text | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Grammar TBA |
Thursday | Activity 10 p.42 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 Grammar TBA |
Friday | Activity 11 p.43 | Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15 |
Sunday, October 31, 2010
Outlining Resource
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/544/01/
Four Main Components for Effective Outlines
Summary: This resource describes why outlines are useful, what types of outlines exist, suggestions for developing effective outlines, and how outlines can be used as an invention strategy for writing.
Contributors:Elyssa Tardiff, Allen Brizee
Last Edited: 2010-04-17 05:25:59
Last Edited: 2010-04-17 05:25:59
Ideally, you should follow these four suggestions to create an effective outline. The examples are taken from the Sample Outline handout.
Parallelism - How do I accomplish this?
Each heading and subheading should preserve parallel structure. If the first heading is a verb, the second heading should be a verb. Example:
- Choose Desired Colleges
- Prepare Application
("Choose" and "Prepare" are both verbs. The present tense of the verb is usually the preferred form for an outline)
Coordination - How do I accomplish this?
All the information contained in Heading 1 should have the same significance as the information contained in Heading 2. The same goes for the subheadings (which should be less significant than the headings). Example:
- Visit and evaluate college campuses
- Visit and evaluate college websites
- Note important statistics
- Look for interesting classes
(Campus and websites visits are equally significant. They are part of the main tasks you would need to do. Finding statistics and classes found on college websites are parts of the process involved in carrying out the main heading topics.)
Subordination - How do I accomplish this?
The information in the headings should be more general, while the information in the subheadings should be more specific. Example:
- Describe an influential person in your life
- Favorite high school teacher
- Grandparent
(A favorite teacher and grandparent are specific examples from the generalized category of influential people in your life.)
Division - How do I accomplish this?
Each heading should be divided into 2 or more parts. Example:
- Compile resume
- List relevant coursework
- List work experience
- List volunteer experience
Project Schedule as printed in Parent/Guardian Letter
The current schedule for the Senior Project deliverables is:
December 6- Final Draft Reports Due
January 18th- Physical Project Due
February 1- Oral Presentations
The following is the report preparation schedule is for my Expository Composition Students:
Introduction to the problem-past due
Topic 1-past due
Methodology-past due
Topic 2- 10/25
Topic 3-11/1
Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections- 11/8
Analysis of Results and Discussion-11/15
Abstract/Précis and Conclusion-11/22
MLA Format References and Appendices-11/29
Final Draft-December 6
December 13- any instructor required changes/edits of December 6th submission are made.
December 16- Final project grade issued.
I have read this letter and understand that there are resources available to help me keep to this schedule. I understand that all students are expected to turn their work in on time. I acknowledge that the Senior Project Final Draft is due on December 6th.
________________________________________ ______________________________ ________________
Student Name Date Period
Signature
___________________________________________________________
Parent/Guardian Name
_________________________________________________________________ _________________
Signature Date
Week 9 Expo Comp Print by Monday class time for 100 Extra Credit Points
Day | Class Work | Homework |
Monday Print weekly syllabus by Monday class time for 100 extra credit points | Complete Activity 22 pp. 61 Reflecting on Writing Read Three Ways to Persuade by John R. Edland for the GIST Answer the following questions in your readers/Writers Notebooks What is the article about? What is the issue/topic? Who is the Writer? What do we know about him? How do we know? Answer the questions for discussion in your Reader’s/Writer’s Notebooks | Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections of Senior Project- 11/8 Grade Window Opens on the 8th. All missing work must be turned in by November 4th for any possibility of partial credit. Draft 2 is the last assignment that will count towards the mid-term grade, if it is not turned in on November 8th you will receive a zero. Each section is worth 100 points. Your draft must be typed doubled spaced. |
Tuesday | Activity 1 and Activity 2 p.53 Surveying the text | Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections- 11/8 |
Wednesday | Activity 3 and Activity 4 p.54 Making Predictions and Asking Questions Vocabulary | Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections- 11/8 |
Thursday | Activity 5 p.55 | Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections- 11/8 |
Friday Mr. Genut will be the guest teacher today | Activity 6 p.56 Looking Closely at Language | Reread Text Read “against the grain” “play the disbelieving and doubting game”… Completed Draft 2 of all prior sections- 11/8 |
Friday, October 29, 2010
Subordinating and Coordinating Conjunction Resource
Coordination/Subordination Resource
Coordination (coordinating conjunction)
Definition: Connects a word to word, a phrase to a phrase, clause to a clause---must be equal or the same type:
Example: A puffer rarely worries about calories or about dieting (two equal phrases connected by or)
Example: He simply puts his lips on a snail and sucks out his next meal (the conjunction and connects the phrase puts his lips on a snail to the phrase sucks out his next meal)
Example: Some living things produce food, and other living things consume food. (The conjunction and connects two independent clauses to make a compound sentence)
Subordination (subordinating conjunction)
Definition: Connects word or groups of words which are not equally important. A subordinate conjunction connects a dependent clause to an independent clause in order to complete the meaning of the dependent clause.
Example: A chocolate sundae tastes best when it is topped with chopped nuts (The clause when it is topped with chopped nuts is dependent. It can’t stand alone and completes the meaning of the sentence)
Example: A brown trout will study the bait before he eats it. (The clause before he eats it is dependent. It depends on the rest of the sentence to complete its meaning)
Example: The desert climate is considered harsh because it is so hot and dry. (A subordinating conjunction introduces the dependent clause in a complex sentence.)
Coordinating Conjunctions: and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet
Subordinating Conjunctions: after, although, as, as if, as long as, as though, because, before, if, in order that, since, so, so that, though, unless, until, when where, whereas, while
Sunday, October 24, 2010
SAY MEAN MATTER TABLE
SAY-MEAN-MATTER
Say-Mean-Matter is the name for a strategy that helps students question the text, search for deeper meanings, and make connections between text and their lives. It’s effective for all student levels from language learners to honors and AP students. It can be used with academic texts, with fiction, and with non-verbal material as well.
The strategy uses a three-column chart. This can be on an overhead, chart paper, chalkboard or whatever is handy. Once students have learned the method, they can quickly draw the graphic organizer and use it to find meaning and significance. SAY, MEAN, and MATTER are the 3 column titles on the chart. When initially teaching the strategy, explain what each means using age-appropriate directions and suggestions.
SAY | MEAN | MATTER |
What does the text say? What happened? Cite text (quotation) or paraphrase. | What does the author mean? How do I interpret this? Read “between the lines.” | Why does it matter to me or others? Why is this important? What is the significance? What are the implications? |
1. For each item on the SAY list, students write what they believe the statement means. Ask questions, such as, “What makes you think that?” “How do you know that?”
3. The third column is the most abstract and may prove to be difficult at first. . Ask yourself : “So what?” “What is the theme of the piece?” “How does this piece connect to your own life?” “What does it matter to you?” Or, “What questions does this piece raise?” “What implications does it hold for a given group of people, or for people in general?” In this column you find the meaning and depth of the piece.
4. Use the ideas recorded on the chart to create your thesis and body paragraphs. One way to do this is to start with a statement from the “MATTER” column as a topic or thesis statement, and then draw on the “SAY” and “MEAN” columns for supporting details. The first column provides “text proof,” (what the text says), while the second column provides student interpretation.
Week Seven ( Print by Tuesday class time for 100 points extra credit)
Day | Class Work | Homework | ||||||||||||||||||||
Monday Print weekly syllabus by Tuesday beginning of class time for 100 extra credit points | RE DO Exercise 14 with Colored Pens one paragraph at a time. Skip Lines For each quote your choose to use as back up for your thesis statement complete the following Table:
| Evaluate your evidence using the Evidence and Identification Chart Find better evidence to support your thesis if needed. Then Complete Redo of exercise 14 | ||||||||||||||||||||
Tuesday | Grammar Activity (Editing your own writing) Sentence problems | Edit your draft Activity 21 | ||||||||||||||||||||
Wednesday | Grammar Activity Sentence Problems | Edit your draft Activity 21 Bring edited draft in on your flash drive to Library today! | ||||||||||||||||||||
Thursday | Library Day Netiquette | Draft of Topic 2 for Senior Project Paper Due Monday 10/25 | ||||||||||||||||||||
Friday | Library Day Submit your Final Draft Via Google Docs by end of class | Activity 22 Reflecting on Writing Read Three Ways to Persuade by John R. Edland for the GIST Answer the following questions in your readers/Writers Notebooks What is the article about? What is the issue/topic? Who is the Writer? What do we know about him? How do we know? Answer the questions for discussion in your Reader’s/Writer’s Notebooks Senior Project: Topic Three Due Monday 11/1 |
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